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Good morning,my name is xxx.I am twelve years old.I am a stdent from CCC Kei To.Today,I'm happy to introduce myself to all of you.I live on Hung Hom.I have a brother.We are live in a flat. In my free time,I read book or magazines and I always listen music when I am unhappy.I always go to school... 顯示更多 Good morning,my name is xxx.I am twelve years old.I am a stdent from CCC Kei To.Today,I'm happy to introduce myself to all of you.I live on Hung Hom.I have a brother.We are live in a flat. In my free time,I read book or magazines and I always listen music when I am unhappy. I always go to school alone.Sometimes,I meet my friend.It would be much happier than walking alone.We talk about everything,such as the student,news,family,friend or classmates.I have a best friend,called Ken.He's tall.His height is about 1.7m,but i only 1.6m.He always get good mark in all subject.He is never talk about studying to some naughty and do not like to school student.He always helped me when I am meet hard in my homework.He is good at English.My favourite subject are Mathematics and Secience.I always got a great mark in my Mathematics and Secience exam.I am week at my Chinese exam.I always lost mark in the Chinses writing park.I'm sure I will keep on studying more in my Chinses writing.So that I can get more mark in my Chinses exam.That's my introduce.Thank you. 更新: 幫到就比20分你 更新 2: THANK YOU

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Good morning,my name is xxx.I am twelve years old.I am a student from CCC Kei To.(Today,)I'm happy(glad) to introduce myself to all of you.I have a brother.We live in a flat in Hung Hom.(If you are going to mention about your brother, why not also briefly introduce your family?As it is kind of wreid to just say"i have a brother") In my free time,I like to read books and magazines and I always listen to music when I am unhappy. I always go to school alone.Sometimes,I meet my friend(s).It is much happier to walk with a friend than to walk alone.We talk about everything,such as news,family,friends or things about school. My best friend is called Ken.He's tall.His height is about 1.7m,but i only 1.6m.(I think if you want to mention the height of your friend,you may say"Ken is much taller than me, his height is about 1.7m but my height is only 1.6m, but this doesn't affect our friendship,......")He is good in all subjects especially in English.He always helped me when I am meet hard in my homework.He is never talks about school work to naughty students who don't like(to go to)school. My favourite subjects are Mathematics and Science.I always get great(i think good is better than great as you dont want them to think that you are arrogant傲慢) marks in these subjects.However, I always loose marks in my Chinese exams especially writing part. I will read and write more in order to improve my Chinese writing.In that case, I can get higher marks in my Chinses exam.That's the end of my introduction.Thank you. 2010-11-24 21:35:35 補充: 我會咁寫第二段: I am twelve years old now.(唔要第一段o個句)I have a brother who is now xx years old.My father is a _____and my mother is a ________.We live in a flat in hung Hom. .......... hope i can help you. 'v'

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